2016年，我开办了福瑞泽英文学校。我在Kerrisdale区租了两间小教室，并在Vansky上打广告。
我招收到温哥华，列治文，本拿比，高贵林等不同城区的学生。为了节省学生赶路时间，我部分地改变原来在自己的小教室上课的计划，对于交通不便的学生，我到学生附近的图书馆或咖啡店给他们一对一或一对二辅导。
Diana姐妹倆就是我在列治文市辅导的学生。当时Diana上十年级，姐姐计划申请大专学校。我一边帮她们补习基础英语，提高她们听说读写的能力，一边辅导Diana的英语语文课和社会课的家庭作业。Diana完成作业后，就用电子邮件把初稿发给我，我给她修改，纠正语法拼写错误，重新组合语句，删除不必要的重复性表达，使文章语法正确，用词得当；简洁清晰，层次分明。
下面是我帮Diana修改校核过的，一篇回答个人健康生活问题的家庭作业的存稿，发布出来跟同学们分享。
Diana Li
Block A
June 10, 2016
Personal Healthy Living Plan Assignment
Part A:
I will not change the way that I eat in general because my eating habit is healthy. Here are some reasons why I think my way of eating is healthy. According to the food guide, a person should “eat at least one dark green and one orange vegetables each day”. I usually eat broccoli, carrot and lettuce every day. I eat an apple and an orange in the evening. For the grain product, I usually have two pieces of whole grain bread or white bread in the morning and eat rice or noodles for my lunch, which matches what food guide says —— at least half of your grain products are whole grain each day. The last reason is that I drink 1% milk every day. I always choose lower fat milk. In addition, I avoid eating pork since it has too much fat in it. I eat two eggs every day in order to get enough protein, which helps make my body strong and healthy.
Part B:
1) I usually do such exercises as running, swimming, and playing basketball. In the morning, I go jogging for ten minutes. I enjoy walking for an hour after my dinner. I think walking can help digest food. According to the daily physical activity requirement, we need do sports 150 minutes a week. So I do physical exercises for 22 minutes every day (150/7=22mins). I have P.E. classes every day and I do lots of exercises in the class. I think I have done enough exercises and I do not need to do more.
2) Here are some challenges that I have to face as I develop and maintain a regular habit of exercising. First, I do not have enough time to do exercises. I need to prepare lots of things before I do exercises. I have to take a shower after finishing the exercises. Second, I cannot do outdoor exercises or aerobic exercises if the weather is bad. Finally, I cannot persist if I do not have any motivation or support from other people.
3) There are many benefits from regular exercises. I can have a strong and healthy body. I can lose my weight properly instead of going on a diet. Exercises can help me improve my sleep quality, too.
( to be continued )
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